Comments on: biz ladies 09: copywriting: a prescription for great text http://www.designsponge.com/2009/05/biz-ladies-09-copywriting-your-prescription-for-great-text.html Your home for all things Design. Home Tours, DIY Project, City Guides, Shopping Guides, Before & Afters and much more Fri, 10 Feb 2012 22:32:38 -0500 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1.3 By: May http://www.designsponge.com/2009/05/biz-ladies-09-copywriting-your-prescription-for-great-text.html/comment-page-1#comment-198227 May Wed, 09 Feb 2011 06:05:28 +0000 http://www.designspongeonline.com/?p=23068#comment-198227 Thank you, great tips... have never thought about the "calls to action". My site leans towards minimalist, so using calls to action can be challenging. I'm always afraid to add content that is not relevant. Less is more? Thank you, great tips… have never thought about the “calls to action”. My site leans towards minimalist, so using calls to action can be challenging. I’m always afraid to add content that is not relevant. Less is more?

]]> By: Vicky Watt http://www.designsponge.com/2009/05/biz-ladies-09-copywriting-your-prescription-for-great-text.html/comment-page-1#comment-138815 Vicky Watt Mon, 22 Mar 2010 14:23:22 +0000 http://www.designspongeonline.com/?p=23068#comment-138815 I too have just discovered Biz Ladies and it's amazing.. Thank you Amanda for your great advice. I'm constantly tweaking copy and took your 'tagline' advice to heart. It's difficult to ensure that the website is coherent because there are various strands - creativity, communication, lifestyle ideals - but hopefully it's improving all the time. Any feedback would be much appreciated. Best wishes, Vicky (Acoustic Wave - Scotland) I too have just discovered Biz Ladies and it’s amazing..

Thank you Amanda for your great advice. I’m constantly tweaking copy and took your ‘tagline’ advice to heart. It’s difficult to ensure that the website is coherent because there are various strands – creativity, communication, lifestyle ideals – but hopefully it’s improving all the time. Any feedback would be much appreciated.
Best wishes,
Vicky (Acoustic Wave – Scotland)

]]> By: jenn http://www.designsponge.com/2009/05/biz-ladies-09-copywriting-your-prescription-for-great-text.html/comment-page-1#comment-115251 jenn Sat, 17 Oct 2009 12:52:02 +0000 http://www.designspongeonline.com/?p=23068#comment-115251 I'm a freelance writer, who has always written news articles, feature stories, and product reviews. My site's product descriptions have been sorely lacking, and i now know what. Your advice is spot on-- highlight benefits not features, and play up your tone by pretending to be a character. This is exactly the direction I needed to be sent in. Thank you! And thanks to d*sponge for all the bizladies articles, they are incredibly helpful. I’m a freelance writer, who has always written news articles, feature stories, and product reviews. My site’s product descriptions have been sorely lacking, and i now know what. Your advice is spot on– highlight benefits not features, and play up your tone by pretending to be a character. This is exactly the direction I needed to be sent in. Thank you! And thanks to d*sponge for all the bizladies articles, they are incredibly helpful.

]]> By: Rhiannon http://www.designsponge.com/2009/05/biz-ladies-09-copywriting-your-prescription-for-great-text.html/comment-page-1#comment-79916 Rhiannon Fri, 15 May 2009 22:13:12 +0000 http://www.designspongeonline.com/?p=23068#comment-79916 I've only just discovered this BizLady strand - I will be working my way through the archives ! Thanks :) I’ve only just discovered this BizLady strand – I will be working my way through the archives ! Thanks :)

]]> By: Bess http://www.designsponge.com/2009/05/biz-ladies-09-copywriting-your-prescription-for-great-text.html/comment-page-1#comment-79820 Bess Fri, 15 May 2009 15:13:44 +0000 http://www.designspongeonline.com/?p=23068#comment-79820 My poor little pen is almost out of ink thanks to all the wonderful info I just jotted down! Thanks Grace and Amanda for all the great info for us little business guys and gals. Let the copy writing improvements begin ;) bess My poor little pen is almost out of ink thanks to all the wonderful info I just jotted down! Thanks Grace and Amanda for all the great info for us little business guys and gals. Let the copy writing improvements begin ;) bess

]]> By: Harish http://www.designsponge.com/2009/05/biz-ladies-09-copywriting-your-prescription-for-great-text.html/comment-page-1#comment-79565 Harish Thu, 14 May 2009 07:54:04 +0000 http://www.designspongeonline.com/?p=23068#comment-79565 This a lot of information which ic really usefull to build up a website so keep posting thanks a lot This a lot of information which ic really usefull to build up a website so keep posting thanks a lot

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